I tip toe around your soul. I wait for you to come out every night, but you never come until dawn, when I have faded away.
My red eyes follow you- every shallow movement, every breath, every twitch.
You sense me. You feel me. You pull your sheets around yourself. The night doesn’t grow any warmer, it’s still as cold as ever. You hide from me.
But nothing remains hidden from me, you see.
I’m omnipresent.
Try all your might, you can’t escape me. I’ll crawl to you, softly filling your lungs, choking you. I’ll enter your mind, bewitching you. I’ll enter your heart.
Welcome to the illusionment.
You say I bring pain.
I don’t.
I thrive on it.
I’m your worst nightmare. I’m your dreams. I’m your first thoughts at dawn. I’m the scream of your nightmares, I’m the soft footsteps tracing your past, always following you.
I’m the unknown, the unquantifiable.
I cannot be seen or touched.
But I can be felt, everytime you close your eyes.
Everytime you look into the dark, I’m there, watching.
I’m your regret, your embarrassment, your sadness.
I can incapicitate you.
I’m your Fear.
Let me In.
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You know it’s thriller, thriller night
You’re fighting to survive inside a killer, thriller tonight.
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Peur* is Latin for Fear.
Darker, but this was quite fun to write!
I love this line- “I’m the soft footsteps tracing your past.” And also, “Everytime you look into the dark, I’m there, watching.”
Wonderful.
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You embarrass me sometimes.
But thank you, anyhow, Gauri! π
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I’m really sorry if I did, in any way. I never meant so.
You’re always welcome.
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Haha, no, you didn’t.
π
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Sorry, I’m getting very awkward. Please tell me what made you write that. π
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I didn’t feel deserving of the praise, G. But Thank You, and I hope this clears it up (?).
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Oh you’re such a grounded person. You deserve all of that praise!
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Thank You. π
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Oh goodness! You’re a genius! How I loved each line! And the end specifically is amazing! Also I loved the same lines as Gauri did and this is mind-blowing –
“But nothing remains hidden from me, you see.
Iβm omnipresent.”
Well, I shouldn’t be picking portions, the entire thing is a beauty.
Now, I am getting excited to read more from you!
Take care, best wishes π
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Thank You, H. It’s very pleasing to know!
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Very true! Omnipresent is apt description of that beast which grips us at times
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Yes, that was the thought behind it. Thank You π
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You’re a terrific writer. Wish I had that skill. I feel sometimes, since starting this blog thing, and reading others’, that I’m in way over my head.
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Don’t worry, if you read my first few posts, they were very basic. I’m not too good, I only started writing acceptably once I got more and more original ideas, along this time I stopped writing poetry-my limited vocabulary didn’t allow me to perfect rhyme and meter, especially since I don’t see a way out of this, my vocabulary is already higher than those around me, so it’s not bound to improve much.
Also, I post once a week-giving me time to edit my posts through constant re-reading. I currently have 5-6 posts still sitting, complete. But I’ll let them simmer- a few weeks give me ample time to add a quote, or remove a few unnecessary lines. The more I do so, the more my posts are appreciated, believe me. And I enjoyed reading your work too, hence the follow.
Thank you. (I’m not sure you wanted a short story for a response, though π )
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Ha! I don’t mind the novella responses. I tend to be the same way. I enjoy the back and forth. Hell of a lot better than a quick “thanks” then no other response. Thanks for checkin’ my stuff out. Really appreciate it.
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Ah, I see. Well, its impulsive-I’ll say something if I have anything good to, and we were having a small chat over there.
Welcome. π
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I’m say way. Feel like I’m hijacking threads sometimes but really I’m just conversing.
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I get that, quite a bit.
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Amaaaazingggβ€οΈ
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Thank You, Shohini! π
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How do you manage to take my breath away with every post?
This is amazing.
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Thank You, Sky!
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You’re welcome. π
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I struggle with it everyday. Thank you for sharing this piece with us.
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Welcome π
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Wonderful π if fear would have a voice it would have sounded like this π
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Thank You π
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Beautifully expressed
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Thank You, Snigdha! π
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Did you receive my message?
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I replied to it.
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Very elegant picture of fear! I enjoyed the slow reveal.
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I’d have loved to continue the show before the reveal simply for the pleasure of writing but it would have dulled the readers interest. Thank You.
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Your most welcome.
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This was just spot on Udit. .
Smooth writing and totally gripping π
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Thank You π
Appreciate you dropping by.
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Ahaa, its nice discussion about this piece of writing at this
place at this blog, I have read all that, so now me also commenting here.
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Yours is one of my favourite blogs here. I…connect with what you write. I don’t know. I love this. You write really, really well.
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It’s people like you who keep me writing!
That made my day. Thanks a lot, Rimjhim! π
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